June thought that the artist caught the perfect reflection of what their Sunday nights were like – her singing, Donald playing the piano as young Kathleen turned the sheet music.
“Just simply wonderful,” June exclaimed. “You got her likeness spot on.”
The artist forced a smile – he was still in shock.
Donald walked in. His hands and pants were soiled with dirt.
“Just look again, Donald,” said June. “He captured Kathleen in a painting. Happy, joyous, alive.”
Donald looked as he began to open the windows to air out the room. “You’ve never done a family portrait like that have you?”
The artist stuttered: “Did you just bury her?”
“The family plot is on the grounds,” said Donald. “You saw her, she was a rotting corpse.”
“But a funeral service?”
“We had one already. I pulled her out for you.”
“For me? How long has she been dead?”
“Nearly a month.”
“A month?” The artist regarded the painting once more. “I did do a fine job I suppose.”
“Indeed,” said June. “Now pay the man, Donald.”
THE PAINTING OF A PROPPED ONE is my submission to the weekly writing challenge by Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/03/27/fffaw-challenge-week-of-march-28-2017/). This week’s photo prompt was provided by Louise with The Storyteller’s Abode. Thank you!
The goal: 75 to 175-word count. This stories word count: 175 words.
Copyright © 2017 E.F. Olsson. All rights reserved.
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Haunting…poignant…intriguing…
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Thank you!
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Very chilling tale! Well told! I enjoyed reading it E.F.!
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Thank you so much, Joy!
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A death mask with a difference. Such is life. A fine piece of writing.
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Thank you very much, Michael!
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Chilling and also i found it darkly funny, the artist’s reaction is priceless. Well done.
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Thanks, Iain! I thought the comment by the artist would be a nice touch to lighten it up a bit.
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A macabre tale indeed. Excellent
My tale is called ‘One beautiful day’
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Thank you, Keith! I enjoyed your story as well – very scandalous! Great job!
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I am intrigued how the artist painted her when he only saw a corpse? Was it from a photo? or her spirit guided his hand and thoughts? lovely story I love mystical tales!
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I visioned it as the body being propped up next to daddy and the artist did his painting.
Thanks for reading!
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Seriously?! Wow! Thanks for explaining and it seems even more morbid now!
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Oh geez. I don’t envy the artist for painting that. Reminds me of those old Victorian funeral photographs that people used to take when their relatives passed away.
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That’s what I thought of when I came up with the idea for this story. Thanks for reading, Chris!
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